Saturday, January 12, 2008
Untitled Bliss- Dark dreams
Off the Ship, disembarked the men,
the plot thickened.
Crisscross shadows scatter and darkened,
my heart beats and my pulse quickened.
There i see; Friends and Foes,
All standing in a row,
Waiting for the final Blow.
Luck's line i towed.
Silently in the dark i waited,
while my mind debated.
I thought, my breath abating,
the task looked daunting.
i woke up much later,
as my vision cleared,
i felt much better,
reassured that nothing was the matter.
:)
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7 comments:
hmmmm....but how come in the end it was nothing?
to come to think of it ....it was so much!!!
it was nothing, just because it was just a dream :)
Well, it is good. Full rhyming and all :)
Thank You ... ur encouragement keeps me going :)
For a minute....You really had me there!!! ;-)
Hi thnx for droppin by my blog. Do dedicate a mssg in my later posts if u have a crush.
@pranay
well ive not figured out how to end them properly yet da.
@mez
lets see about that :)
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